Happy Agent Monday, everyone! Yes, it’s January and bleak and cold. BUT it’s also a shiny new year, and the days are growing LONGER. Yes! Time to get energized and kick your writing career into higher gear. If you are seeking a literary agent, that means you are writing something you hope will be commercially successful. Something that will land on the bookstore shelves all across the country. So here is a task you must all do without delay: Visit bookstores and see what is actually on their shelves right now. Why? There are vital lessons you can learn from a bookstore!
Visiting a bookstore and browsing for books is a vital part of being a writer, for sure. But I want you to actually go there now as a student of the commercial book market. Bring a small notebook, and keep in your mind where you think your own work in progress will fit on the shelf.
Now go to that shelf — first of all, does that shelf exist? If it’s a category that doesn’t exist, you’ve got a problem right there. As an agent, I can’t sell books that are so different or such a mash up that they don’t fit into a particular category when it comes to sales. Why? Because an editor can’t make an offer on such a book. Why? Because an editor can’t convince his or her publisher and sales team that a book without a category will sell. And why does that matter?
Because a book that won’t sell, will be a book that will fail to make any money. The publishing business is a business. And a successful book is one that sells. Yes, writing is an art. But once you are approaching an agent, you are approaching the commercial market. So step one in your bookstore bookshelf class is to figure out what shelf your book will belong on.
This is why saying your book is for all ages is a fail for you when you pitch. There is no shelf for that. What you CAN say is that your book is a YA with cross-over appeal. That means it’ll sit on the YA shelf, but that adults will also go to that shelf to find it. This is why saying there is no other book like yours is a fail when you pitch. It is like SOMETHING, it has SOME MAIN READER. You need to find these somethings and someones, so you can say it is, say, a romance, but unique because it features… See the difference? Now you have a category, plus a unique sales hook that will help your title be found by readers.
Okay, so once you find your shelf, the next thing you need to do is to see what is already on it.
What’s on the end caps, what titles are face out, which ones have multiple copies on the shelf? Those are likely the “hits.” Good to be aware of these.
Look closely at the type of books elsewhere on your shelf. At the titles. At the covers. Which are the most effective and the most interesting to you? How does your own novel’s title compare? Can you imagine what the cover might be?
Which other books might the reader of your own novel also be drawn to? Have YOU read these? You should. Why? Because then you can have a current take on the market yourself. You can then honestly say in your query something like: Readers who love the high stakes and honest characterization of THIS POPULAR BOOK, will be drawn to WHAT’S IN YOUR BOOK.
Now, before you leave the bookstore, buy some books. Help your bookstore succeed. You want them to be thriving, don’t you? Someday they will be selling your books!
Visiting the bookstore, notebook in hand, gets you seeing the big picture. Where your book fits. Who your audience really is. What market an agent/editor/publisher can sell it to. Buying books is also an important part of the commercial cycle. A cycle that you want to fully involve you and your work.
Your homework will pay off in numerous ways:
– Now you’ll know without a doubt what your book’s category is.
– You’ll have a list of current competing titles (and of authors – who were THEIR agents?…not a bad list of agents to consider approaching, right?).
– You’ll have a more focused outlook overall about your novel, a more realistic idea of your market. This will all result in a better targeted query letter, and a commercial view of your book’s potential that agents and editors will appreciate.
*NB: Be grounded and realistic, too. Trust me, saying that this is the next HARRY POTTER will only make eyes roll. But saying that your work offers a twist on the middle grade fantasy, with an unusual magical theme that fans of Rowling should enjoy… well, you see the difference in the two statements, right?
Understanding all of this is an important step for you. Publishing is a business. YOUR business. So head on out there and study up.
*Marie is an Associate Agent at The Jennifer De Chiara Literary Agency in New York City. To keep up with all her Agent Monday posts, subscribe to her site by clicking on the Follow link located on her page on the upper left margin.
Great ideas. I try to do this when I can, but I live so far from bookstores it’s difficult. Hopefully I’ll be able to get out in the next couple of weeks and take stock of what’s selling right now. Thanks for writing this post. I shared it on Twitter and Pinterest.
Glad this helps! Consider it a business trip…
I will use the phrase with crossover appeal. Thank you!
Sounds like a plan!
Your crafting of manuscript descriptions in today’s post is wonderful. Plus, making friends at bookstores may lead even further. Our local bookstore is assisting a friend who recently published. They order the books and go with her to public events, handling the sales. Who would have thought!
Definitely important to be a part of your writing community on ALL sides. Bookstores, librarians, being a reader, supporting fellow authors. It’s all important – and not just for career reasons. 🙂
Thank you for a great post. On a previous visit to a bookstore, I had located “my shelf” and a similar author, then decided that my homework was done. It never occurred to me to look at all the titles and compare the winners to the others and mine. I think I need to take a second look at my title, so it’s off to my bookstore for another visit to complete my homework. 🙂
Barbara of the Balloons
Good work, Barbara! You’ll get an “A” for sure 🙂
Great advice, thanks for sharing!
Happy to help!
I just happened -by luck- to do your assignment over the weekend at Barnes & Nobel.
I was browsing the Middle Grade section for the current crop of MG fiction.
I went a step further and ooked at where my book will sit on the shelf.
It will be: between, Jen Malone and Ami Polonsky. Good company, huh?